1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).
EBI: You need to revise terminology and theory - Q2, Q3. You don't mention reception theory in Q3. For Q6, you need to answer the question: can low budget independent films compete with Hollywood ? You also need to know the CSPs better.
WWW: This is good lesson in two critical areas for exams success: content knowledge and exam technique.
2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully (you'll need your Greenford Google login to access this). Write down the mark you achieved for each question:
Q1: 1/1 mark
Q2: 0/1 mark
Q3: 2/8 mark
Q4: 1/2 marks
Q5: 2/2 marks
Q6: 4/20 marks
Where you didn't achieve full marks, write WHY you think you missed out on the extra marks. Use the indicative content suggestions in the mark scheme to help with this. If you got any media terminology wrong in the assessment you can make a note of it here.
The 20 marker question as i need to actually answer the question and also and more detail in it such as explaining the budget and the direct and etc like how much did they make at the box office.
3) Look specifically at question 3 - did you successfully write about both the preferred and oppositional readings? Did your answers match any in the mark scheme? Copy in one answer from the mark scheme that you could have used.
ACTUALLY read the question before doing the question because i never did that in the test
4) Now look at question 4. Write a definition of vertical integration plus the benefits of it to revise this key industry terminology. You may find the blogpost on ownership and control helpful here.
3) Look specifically at question 3 - did you successfully write about both the preferred and oppositional readings? Did your answers match any in the mark scheme? Copy in one answer from the mark scheme that you could have used.
ACTUALLY read the question before doing the question because i never did that in the test
4) Now look at question 4. Write a definition of vertical integration plus the benefits of it to revise this key industry terminology. You may find the blogpost on ownership and control helpful here.
5) Finally, look at your 20-mark essay - question 6. Read this exemplar answer to help give you an idea of what a top-level response looks like. Then, write a new essay plan for this question, using the suggested answers in the mark scheme and the exemplar to help you. Use a format like this:
Introduction - answer the question:
I, Daniel Blake main points:
Black Widow main points:
Optional additional paragraph if you wish:
Conclusion - sum up your argument in one sentence:
Conclusion - sum up your argument in one sentence:
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