Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response

1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to).

www- you show some good knowledge of terminology and the Galaxy csp- the challenge now is adding consistency and working on your exam technique 

ebi- the key area to work on is question focus. see the tatler social and cultural context question. use paragraph!

you also need to write more for 12 marker questions. 

2) Look at the mark scheme for this assessment. For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify three points that you could have referred to in your answer.

-Athletic body connotes that the subject is in condition and well prepared for the
‘battle’.
-The brand name ‘Under armour’ has connotations of battle and war being connected
to sport.
-Long shot shows the whole power of the body and the effort involved in pushing the
tyre.

3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main narrative theories and how we can link them to the Galaxy advert CSP. 

There is disequilibrium at the start when the village is associated with chaos (fruit
falling, bus stopping, people shouting). This is juxtaposed with the calm, heroic
persona that the audience encounters when they meet Hepburn and, when the new
equilibrium is restored at the end, the sweeping vista suggests endless possibilities /
traditional happy ending at the closure of the narrative.

4) Now look at Question 4 - Tatler and social/cultural contexts. Use the mark scheme to identify three points you could have made in your answer here.

-Use of green colour scheme (fresh and new) with white text (style,
class, sophistication).
-Cover image reflects British culture’s interest in stately homes and
high society events with Weymouth dressed in a ballgown in the
gardens of her Longleat house.
-Emma Weymouth, Marchioness of Bath, cover star – reflects
changing attitudes towards race and ethnicity in Britain and the
influence of campaigns such as the Black Lives Matter movement.

5) On Section B, focus on Question 7 - film industry and Black Widow. Use the mark scheme to identify three ways Black Widow was marketed to its audience.

-the Marvel website with gallery, story synopsis, character posters and
opportunities to buy or stream the movie.
-the Covid pandemic and it therefore
did not make as much money at the box office
-Social media profiles on TikTok, Instagram, Twitter and Facebook. Social media and
YouTube advertising was also heavily used by Marvel to promote the film

6) Finally, write down three things you are going to work on before your next mock exam in December (e.g. time management; revising CSPs etc.)

first i am going to revise the csp, after i am going try and find a past paper and practice it and finally read the questions properly 

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